Tuesday, 24 November 2015

the pile of leaves

Once there was a hedgehog called Snuffles. He lived in the forest in a little hole. One day he found a pile of leaves that had berries in it, he desperately wanted them, so he got some and fell down a deep deep hole that felt like it went forever! He was so worried he dropped his berries "AHHH"he said, but then he landed on a big bouncy trampoline then he saw a fox"Hello welcome to berry land!"Said the fox. Wow this has always been my dream!"Said Snuffles.""Hi my name is Lola and this is Pete the deer." "Hi" said Pete."Umm how do I get back up?"asked Snuffles." Ohhh "said Pete "That is very hard you have to cross the river of piranhas candy!""Ok lets go!"said Snuffles!""I'll make a fruity bridge!"10 seconds later... I'm done clip clap clip clap" Wow" said Lola "that was amazing!""Look"said Pete "there's the fairy""Please return Snuffles back to land"ting "SEE YA!           BY ZARA

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